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PostSubject: Viper   Viper I_icon_minitimeTue May 31, 2011 11:08 pm

Name: Hebi - Viper

Manifestation:
Spoiler:

Command: Don't fail

Type: Summon

Family: Neutral

Level: Bankai

Blade Description: Sealed state 3 feet long blade, black hilted katana with a curled-up snake insignia.

Shikai:

Spoiler:

Bankai:

Spoiler:

Owner: Orochi, Jack


Techniques:

1st Technique [Shikai]

Name: Absorb

Offensive
Upon establishing a connection with the opponent's blade or body, Viper steals Reiatsu for its wielder. Amount varies based on the duration of the established contact or amount of Reiatsu put into the attack.

Cooldown of 3 posts


2nd Technique [Bankai]

Name: Viper's true form.

Supplementary
Summons a humongous snake that drains the Reiatsu of the opponent(s), replenishing the Reiatsu of its wielder. Once slain, the wielder has to wait for four posts until he can use this technique again. Every consecutive use during the same battle will result in a larger amount of smaller snakes per use. 1 - 2 - 4 etc. The amount of Reiatsu drained will be independant regardless of the size of the snakes, however the smaller the snake the larger the penalty to both offense and defense of the wielder.
(can only be used when the its wielder are in Bankai)

Cooldown of 6 posts


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PostSubject: Re: Viper   Viper I_icon_minitimeWed Jun 01, 2011 9:53 pm

I don't see any relation of nature family in your 1st technique. For 2nd technique, increase it cooldown as it is a summon and it is in bankai. And for me, just my POV, I think this is more like a neutral type one.
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PostSubject: Re: Viper   Viper I_icon_minitimeThu Jun 02, 2011 4:00 am

Have now edit the things you wanted =3
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PostSubject: Re: Viper   Viper I_icon_minitimeThu Jun 02, 2011 1:21 pm

Approved
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